This is a little better but still feels forced.
I don't know this guy from Adam but I'll do a quick psychological evaluation based on posts ITT:
Overweight white middle aged male. Divorced at least once. Likely has multiple children that he fails to support, whether financially, emotionally, or otherwise. Average IQ but believes he is more intelligent than he actually is. Narcissistic with poor analytic thinking skills. Quick to anger and unlikely to change beliefs even when presented with counter evidence. High likelihood of using violence against his family to maintain control. Murder/suicide involving family unit, or what remains, cannot be ruled out. Frequent thoughts of sexual fantasies involving a "forbidden partner", like an underaged girl or close relative.