Would be better if not written with a slight right bias. The truth is there, leaning a little too hard for it to land with any impact on the old liberals. They will dismiss it. It only rallies the right. This is one of the problems as we work for middle ground. Let the truth speak. Don’t over reach.
I know I’ll get disagreement on this but we are all hard right here so I would expect it. As a point, many of the old liberal policies have become right acceptance. Just saying.